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The following features are based on women related issues.
FEATURE 1:
Her
Power!
By
Ms. Tanvi Kamat Bambolkar
There is a measure in physics called
“horse power”. According to Google its “Horsepower (HP) is the name of
several units of measurement of power. The most common definitions equal
between 735.5 and 750 watts”. But recently I visited a young girl suffering
from a serious disease in hospital and encountered what I term as "her
power".
The girl was pinched with all sorts of
wires around her neck; she had been out of ICU just that morning. To my
amazement, the girl was smiling, laughing actually and talking endlessly. Her
mother narrated an incident where she was being taken inside the room even the
doctors were shivering to start medications on her as the case was really
serious but the doctors said that just because she did not scream and was
smiling they were able to save her. That was “her power”.
Women! She suffers, she gets hurt but
something is there in her that allows her to smile and carry on with the life.
There is a misconception among the men and also women that women are
emotionally weaker and they tend to cry easily and quickly. Psychologically,
this notion totally wrong. By crying she just vents out her emotions. She
doesn’t hide it somewhere deep inside like men do. They try to show that they
are strong and control their cry. But I have seen women in my life who have
stood strong during the tough times of life. The reality of life is hidden
somewhere in the cobwebs of our customs and traditions. Traditionally women are
considered as weaker than men in the physical aspect but women are
stronger in emotional, psychological, social, intellectual and sexual aspects.
Ask yourselves, when do guys ever try to express their emotions? Do women start
smoking out of little stress? Actually women go through so many stressful events
in life. Naturally their psychological health is better. Women are
“gossip queens” because they are socially strong. They survive because we talk
and we express. It’s not that men do not express but they do it little. Of
course I don’t need to talk about intellectual side of it as it is already
known that most of the state rankers are girls and more girls pass in the board
and university exams than boys. Sexually, well, if I start I would repeat
only what research has proven.
I guess my heart was too feministic this
time. Yeah… the “her power” hidden in me do come out in such way sometimes.
This doesn’t mean I intended to hurt men. I love men. All of them in my life
but just wanted to say that don’t underestimate women. We are not weaker sex!
When the time comes “her power” does arise and it would keep arising! Salute to
the "her power"..!
FEATURE 2:
Gender Bias: When Humans Take it Beyond Themselves
by
Ms. Palia Gaonkar
Day by day, the number of abandoned
animals increases fourfold. The moment they can walk on all fours and can see
clearly through their novel eyes, they are termed fit to survive on their own
and left at the gate of a stranger. They would probably be females. No.
Obviously females. The owner cannot support too many of them. Replace the animals
with a female human baby. There is not much difference in both the cases.
There are many situations where female
counterparts of pets are given away or left at someone’s gate, or left at the
market place, or left to die. Reasons may be myriad, genuine…justifiable?
Why should the females of most species
undergo similar fate? Just because they bear female offspring or because being
born a female in itself is a misfortune? Except the offspring of the animals
considered as livestock, others find themselves on the roads. Always looking
out for gains, the humans! It’s funny being born one.
With the snapping of string of
compassion and reason, the world is free to commit any kind of wrong against
any life in the world. By crying out till the throats bled, abortion, female
foeticide, female infanticide, prenatal sex determination has been strictly
prohibited, practice of which would lead to heavy punishments. Nevertheless, it
goes on, illegally. “Every legal activity as an illegal counterpart in India,” he
said as he shifted the gear, “The one that earns revenue for the government is
legal, and whatever does not, is termed as illegal. But corruption works in
both cases.”
After birth she becomes a victim of
molestation, rape, prostitution - a mere toy to be played with. They forget,
though, that they have been born out of one such toy.
Taking care of a female life is
considered expensive. It requires special attention and a lot of sacrifice on
the part of the guardian. But it is only so because they deserve it. Though
conception of life may require both the partners, during the period of
gestation it is only and only the female who is to be given the credit for the
healthy growth of the child that belongs to both of them. She nurtures life. It
is a blessing, a power. To have a life growing within oneself would be such a
magical experience. And only the female of every species is fortunate enough to
be blessed by this miracle. Why not then consider her gifted perpetually, and
thank the almighty for being blessed by having her in one’s life? Or is it too extravagant
for the ego?
The world has become entangled in so
many illusions that basics of life have been forgotten. There is a need to peel
off the thick cosmetic layer and realize our true identity as human beings, and
not as a man or a woman. If life is viewed in plain and simple perspective,
many differences would vanish and things would fall in place.
Good start!! :)
ReplyDeleteabout palia's article -- can you look at the structure paragraph wise? a couple of breaks seemed unnecessary...
who is the quote attributed to in the fourth para?
and the link you are trying to make between animals and humans..seems weak, you could have made it stronger. the focus of your write up is on woman..so the lead to it should be strong..
on the whole good job.
tanvi -
ReplyDeletethere are grammatical issues over the whole piece. Some sentences do not have verbs in them!! the second para has a long sentence which needs to be truncated and split.
the arguments you pose in the piece needs work.. it seems emotional..(as you said) did you proof read it? :) get into that habit.
i know what you wanted to say.. so, in that sense good piece. needs work though! :)
Andrew